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Directing his mount
down the narrow, uneven streets of the crowded market place, his dark,
smouldering eyes, like fiery embers, stared hard at each trader, obviously in
search of someone. Those that noticed his piercing stare shuddered and quickly
averted their eyes, pretending unconvincingly that they were unaware of the
stranger's gaze. "Pity the man he's looking for" they thought, each one relieved that it wasn't him.
The stranger, for his part, as if ignorant of the eyes which
fixed on his back as he passed, wound his horse through the swarming
populace, until, eventually, his attention was arrested by an elderly,
cadaverous individual, who stood stooped over a stall with a variety of menacing-looking instruments displayed upon it. Congealed blood crusted the instruments, and
also stained the stall-holder's threadbare habiliments, and when the stranger noticed
this, not for the first time since he had begun his mission, he trembled
inwardly.
He dismounted and approached the man, who, regarding the
stranger with interest, drew back the flap of the tent behind the stall,
entered, and beckoned him to follow. The stranger cautiously obliged and stepped
inside. He scrutinized the gloomy interior at great length and then studied the
stall-holder nervously.
"Are you Korath?" he at last demanded from the
man, who, compared to the stranger, seemed almost like a dwarf, though in
truth he was of no mean stature. Sensing hesitation in his voice, the
stall-holder allowed a contemptuous sneer to flicker across his
vulture-like features. "And what if I am?" he enquired softly, unintimidated by
the other's height. His sepulchral tone sent an icy chill of fear down the
stranger's spine. "I seek a man named Korath" said the stranger edgily, "and from the description I was given,
or rather, extracted......" Here he faltered, as if from
somewhere far away, a long-suppressed, unpleasant memory had suddenly
resurfaced in his mind's eye. Recovering quickly from his momentary pause,
however, he went on "......from a whelp now dead, you appear to be he whom I
seek!"
As he spoke, a black servant, easily equal to the stranger's
great height and almost twice as broad, entered the tent bearing the various
strange implements that had been exhibited outside and set them to rest upon a
rough-hewn, bloodstained wooden table. The stall-holder edged his way closer to
the bench, trying to conceal his furtive manner with a casual air, but the
stranger, with a sudden look of fear and anger, swept the man's legs from under
him with a powerful kick. "Your actions betray your identity!" he thundered. "I
was a fool to come here!" "Do you truly believe you had a choice in the
matter?" the stall-holder cackled, picking himself up from the floor.
The
stranger, puzzled by the man's words, momentarily stood undecided in his
actions. The stall-holder, taking advantage of this weakness, shouted a command
in a strange tongue to his ebony servant, who instantly moved towards the
stranger in an attempt to subdue him. However, the stranger, now galvanized into
frenzied activity, drew his mighty sword from his side and beheaded the servant
with one fierce, swift stroke. The bloodied torso tottered for a moment, and
then, like a marionette whose strings had been suddenly severed, fell to the
ground, a lifeless husk.
Unnoticed by the stranger, however, the
stall-holder had meanwhile crept around behind him, withdrawing something from
under one of the folds in his robe as he did so. There was a sudden flash of
movement as a vicious bludgeon cleaved through the air towards the stranger's
unprotected head. The next moment, consciousness was racing abruptly away from
him, to be replaced by the fearful, terrifying clutch of an all-enveloping, icy
darkness.
******
When the stranger came to, he found himself reclining on
several cushions of a luxurious purple velvet, which, though oddly at variance
with the other rather spartan trappings, were spread of the floor of the tent. For a moment he wondered where he was, and then, remembering, a look of dread
flashed through his eyes, but disappeared when he realized he was alive and
unhurt. The emaciated visage of the stall-holder appeared before him, nodding
benignly. "Is it done?" the stranger asked, incredulously. "It is done!" replied the man called Korath.
The stranger rose
to his feet and removed six gleaming gold coins from a well-worn leather pouch hanging from his belt and tossed them onto the table. "One for your services,
the other five to replace your slave" he said, nodding in the direction of the
corpse, which still lay undisturbed where it had fallen. "A thousand pardons
for my disrespectful behaviour earlier" begged the stranger. "Some demon must
have possessed my senses. I... I just lost my head". "As did my servant" said
Korath, good-naturedly.
"I trust you won't reveal my cowardice to
anyone" continued the stranger, nervously toying with his cloak in an attempt
to cover his embarrassment. "I swear by Krell, old one, that it was totally
unlike me. Usually I'm quite stout-hearted. A curse on my head if I'm lying to
you!" "Never fear" soothed Korath with a twinkle in his eye. "Even the bravest
of men fear a visit to... the tooth-extractor!"
He chortled inwardly to himself as he handed the
stranger his recently removed molar and watched him depart.
6 comments:
That story was spoiled by the casual, almost jokey murder of the servant.
For feck's sake, CJ - it's a jokey story about a guy's trip to the dentist, intended as a parody of Robert E. Howard type tales. People get murdered all the time in THEM.
OK, I withdraw my complaint. Your story was a masterpiece, Kid :)
Ah, but where did I say that it was MY story, CJ?
Come on, Kid, own up, was it one of yours?
Anyway, it was a brilliant story!
I was completely unexpecting the ending, which made me chuckle out loud!
Oh, you should know by now, JP, that I'm far too modest and humble to to blow my own trumpet. Why, I'm famous for being modest and humble, as anybody who knows me will tell you. I will agree with you though, that it's a brilliant story (he said, modestly).
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