tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post529872200395270935..comments2024-03-28T18:40:59.101+00:00Comments on CRIVENS! COMICS & STUFF!: A TASTE OF PARADISE - A VERY SHORT STORY...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-76113958215610781392017-06-30T16:04:50.192+01:002017-06-30T16:04:50.192+01:00What are you on about? I was meaning Louie Spence....What are you on about? I was meaning Louie Spence.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-21388130741435437632017-06-30T15:43:49.205+01:002017-06-30T15:43:49.205+01:00You buggah! - You literally made me "laugh ou...You buggah! - You literally made me "laugh out loud", whilst the missus was discussing a serious matter with me!<br />I don't know WHY Leo Sayer would have anything against you, though!?John Pitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08035300858247327343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-26905796348814439812017-06-30T15:29:06.643+01:002017-06-30T15:29:06.643+01:00If I ever get knocked down, JP, the driver's i...If I ever get knocked down, JP, the driver's initials are likely to be LS. (Tell the police.) See? I can laugh at such things.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-34988392034169120472017-06-30T15:08:55.392+01:002017-06-30T15:08:55.392+01:00Just gotta clarify what I meant by my "Who kn...Just gotta clarify what I meant by my "Who knows,...." sentence!<br />I didn't mean that you might get knocked down! What I meant is when you leave this planet, your personal paradise might be something like that?<br />( Oops! )John Pitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08035300858247327343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-78990823700500893502017-06-30T14:03:24.132+01:002017-06-30T14:03:24.132+01:00Well, loosely based on myself, as far as location ...Well, loosely based on myself, as far as location goes, JP, but it was written for everybody. What can I say, I'm a generous sort of guy. Unfortunately, we've all got to 'cross the road' when our time comes. Let's just hope it's better on the other side.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-73961195824462459192017-06-30T13:12:12.244+01:002017-06-30T13:12:12.244+01:00Wow! That is a POWERFUL short story, Kid! I could ...Wow! That is a POWERFUL short story, Kid! I could tell that Robert was based on yourself straight away, but I wasn't expecting the twist, until you mentioned "crossing the road". And I became quite emotional at that point! Who knows, that might be how it will be for you?<br />With regard to a desire to visit the past places, I only do so in my mind. It would break my heart to see the actual changes, so I have "preserved" them how I left them!John Pitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08035300858247327343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-72604659011820252122017-06-30T12:22:39.887+01:002017-06-30T12:22:39.887+01:00Oh, and I see MY 'weirdo stalker' is back,...Oh, and I see MY 'weirdo stalker' is back, ticking this and the previous post as 'funny'. He's not quite able to stop visiting this blog, is he? Now I wonder who it could be? I see DuckDuckGo in my visitor stats quite often, so it's obviously someone who doesn't want to lay a trail. H'mm.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-28347292829744187812017-06-30T12:15:10.519+01:002017-06-30T12:15:10.519+01:00Well, might've been 25. And yeah, I've see...Well, might've been 25. And yeah, I've seen myself taking ages on a response to someone, in order to properly convey what I'm trying to say. But just think, PM, there most likely are loads of people who never think about things like this.<br /><br />******<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed it, S. Makes the 20-25 minutes I put into it worth the effort. More than worth it in fact. Yeah, wouldn't it be great if time travel was a reality.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-21274885808161179282017-06-30T12:09:50.592+01:002017-06-30T12:09:50.592+01:00I enjoyed reading the story
It touched a cord wit...I enjoyed reading the story <br />It touched a cord with me.<br />If we could only go back just for a short time it would be like a taste of paradise stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05721049800016095243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-29863819728590255602017-06-30T11:40:51.960+01:002017-06-30T11:40:51.960+01:0020 minutes!!! it took me 20 minutes to write my r...20 minutes!!! it took me 20 minutes to write my reply! - I like these type of stories as its good to know you (me) are not the only one that think about Things like this.Paul McScotty Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300292599442281225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-29008486690631070292017-06-30T11:35:19.369+01:002017-06-30T11:35:19.369+01:00I borrowed some elements from my own history (main...I borrowed some elements from my own history (mainly 'geographical') for the story (write what you know, they say), but it's by no means 'autobiographical', and is intended for anyone who can relate to the sentiment of the piece. Congratulations, therefore, on being 'tuned-in', and discerning enough to see any merit in the tale. Wrote it in about 20 minutes yesterday while waiting for a boiler repairman to turn up. Tweaked it a little since, and may tweak a little more as it occurs to me. Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-79110459561056038402017-06-30T11:25:56.222+01:002017-06-30T11:25:56.222+01:00I think we all at some point want to "runaway...I think we all at some point want to "runaway" to a time in the past when it was all easier - or to be in the presence of those no longer here- Nostalgia is a strange thing its so near and yet a lifetime away at the same time, very frustrating at times. Im sure a lot of folk read this and just thought "yeah" or maybe it ws to personal to reply. Nice things are always worthwhile no matter how small they may seem, they all add up and that was a nice (worthwhile) story. Paul McScotty Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300292599442281225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-1944864795462367532017-06-30T11:03:41.481+01:002017-06-30T11:03:41.481+01:00Glad you enjoyed it, PM. (It seems to have gone do...Glad you enjoyed it, PM. (It seems to have gone down like a lead balloon, going by the number of comments it's received.) It wasn't 'til I re-read it just there that I realized that you, in particular, would be able to relate to it because of your own situation.Kidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224781868125924337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3740495193314269367.post-9165507210511711932017-06-30T10:42:35.836+01:002017-06-30T10:42:35.836+01:00That was really good Kid - lets have more when you...That was really good Kid - lets have more when you get time. I think we all want to revisit the past and who knows maybe paradise is exactly that when the day comes you go back to a time you were really happy / content at least in your mind for a nano second of eternity.Paul McScotty Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300292599442281225noreply@blogger.com